Growing up in a society with an incessant number of distractions, it is often adverse to develop one’s sense of self. Today, the vast impacts of media on individuals in society has made it almost impossible to know oneself. The life long internalization of these sociological forces has created a lack of curiosity among individuals. We never stop to question why we do what we do. We are so deeply socialized to the point that most individuals are not even aware of its detrimental effects.
In learning about the rhetorical analysis unit, I found myself especially intrigued as I had never experienced a form of writing like this. McMurtrey’s detailed lectures broke down the rhetoric we are often unaware of in our own communication. The use of rhetorical strategies, diction, tone, mood, audience, and more are all intently planned in a way to persuade the listener. The information that Professor McMurtrey disclosed to the class caused me to reflect on the, likely numerous, times that I have been manipulated by an individual’s rhetoric; I was astounded. Had I manipulated someone with my own rhetoric before? Incrementally learning more and more about its effects, I was delighted to move forward in the unit and begin my own essay. As I have always been a rather introspective person, I was thrilled to uncover the answers to questions that are frequently overlooked or ignored in society.
In writing my own rhetorical analysis paper, I decided to analyze the rhetorical choices of Michelle Obama. The monumental impact that she has had on young women in America has been inspirational as a feminist myself; I look up to her immensly. Furthermore, as I picked apart her New Hampshire speech, I discovered many appeals within including: ethos, pathos, inclusive diction, logos, and more. Michelle’s tactful choices were interesting to analyze as a writer myself. Moreover, I thoroughly enjoyed this process as I was able to learn significant information regarding the power of rhetoric. I am looking forward to applying the skills I’ve learned into my future works.
The rhetorical expertise I’ve gained through this unit will be instrumental in all aspects of my life going forward. In both the working world and in my classes I participate in numerous presentations. Understanding and applying impactful rhetoric within these presentations will serve as an extremely beneficial tool. Furthermore, as a friend, daughter, and student, I find myself engaging in communication on a daily basis; I am a very social person. Applying the rhetorical strategies I’ve learned into my diction and syntax while speaking will improve my communication skills dramatically, while also improving my clarity.
Rhetoric is a privilege that we are all gifted with. How we choose to navigate and explore its depths is up to our curiosity. We must break through and desocialize ourselves in order to maximize this freedom.
Composing The Self 
Hi Hannah! This is a very interesting post! I find it especially interesting that you mentioned you’d never been exposed to rhetorical analysis or persuasive writing before because I think a lot of us start learning how to persuade people around age 14. I think the fact that I learned it so young probably contributed to the fact that I’ve never really seen it as manipulative, but rather strategic instead. With that said, rhetoric definitely is power, and it can be used both in good and bad ways, and I appreciate the way you called that out! Keep it up!
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